I feel like crying - you made it sweet and gentle and beautiful - the eye is quite perfect
I feel you are a friend, and you understand we sharks are not the meanie evil thing most people think we are
Oh, now you're making me feel like crying too! I've always admired sharks and I'm always happy to honor them! Thank you so much!
Spindrift shark
You float upon waves of azure gold,
Laughing freely,
Thinking of Life,
Nothing of Death.
Swimming,
Slipping,
Tirelessly singing
Silently
Of unknown fish dreams:
"Come away!" You seem to whisper,
Yet the land holds me so!
--Simple Song #4
I wrote the poem a while back during high school I just thought it was a nice little piece and I was so interested in the ocean and marine life...goodness, I think I still am! But thank you and I'm glad you liked it
I feel like crying - you made it sweet and gentle and beautiful - the eye is quite perfect
I feel you are a friend, and you understand we sharks are not the meanie evil thing most people think we are
Spindrift shark
You float upon waves of azure gold,
Laughing freely,
Thinking of Life,
Nothing of Death.
Swimming,
Slipping,
Tirelessly singing
Silently
Of unknown fish dreams:
"Come away!" You seem to whisper,
Yet the land holds me so!
--Simple Song #4
...what is that beautiful "Simple Song #4"? ...who wrote it? where does it come from? who performs it?
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